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Post by Mirage Arena Mod on Feb 6, 2018 8:37:36 GMT -5
Raid 002 Review This raid is now in review status. Please use the template at the bottom of the page to review this raid. Full guide for reviewing can be found here. For every knowledgeable and well written review, you will gain 20 munny to the character account you post the review with. Please be sure that your review is detailed and informed. Site Rules still apply to raid reviews, so be polite and respectful. Everything a member posts is to be read as constructive criticism and is not to be taken as an attack. Any issues should be reported directly to a staff member. World Attacked: The World That Never Was Initiating Party: Syel the Green [Leader], Ysera, Dieter Wolfram, Cassialyn Frewin, and @suly [NEUTRAL] Defending Party: @terrable [Leader], @xemnas, @maleficent, and Rina Croft [DARK] Neutral initiated the Raid. Who do you think won the Raid? Decision Date: Feb 13th, 2018 Template [font size="4"][b]Damage Inflicted and Taken:[/b][/font] [blockquote]Reasoning goes here, please show your work on how you made your decision.[/blockquote] [div align="center"][******[font color="yellow"]Light[/font] | [font color="red"]Dark[/font] | [font color="purple"]Neutral[/font]******][/div]
[b][font size="4"]Skill and Style:[/font][/b] [blockquote]Reasoning goes here, please show your work on how you made your decision.[/blockquote] [div align="center"][******[font color="yellow"]Light[/font] | [font color="red"]Dark[/font] | [font color="purple"]Neutral[/font]******][/div]
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Post by Deleted on Feb 7, 2018 2:08:49 GMT -5
Damage Inflicted and Taken: This section would probably have a lot more going for it if the raid proceeded beyond introductions. As it stands, gotta judge it for what's there. As far as attacks go, Dark were a lot more aggressive, both Xemnas and Terranort hitting home with their attacks. However, because of some timely buffs made by team Helios's Ambition, the damage they could do was reduced. This is not to mention Maleficent's Meteors, which dealt quite a bit of damage to Dieter at least. On the flip side, you have Team Ambition, who seemed to only get off a couple of damaging attacks and only one was seen to hit, even if it hit at full force due to Xemnas not having magical protection. I'm going to have to give this to Dark for their more aggressive approach. [******Dark******] Skill and Style: So, I particularly liked the strategy employed here. Namely, the strategy employed by Neutral. The instant they were attacked, they immediately opened with buffs to help out Ysera and each other. While not particularly damaging, it would have stymied Dark's ability to deal damage to them. The only one who seemingly didn't do anything was Suly and even she managed to catch Rina off-guard with her presence, albeit unintentionally. I particularly liked how Helios's Ambition seemed to work like a well-oiled machine, whereas only Terranort and Xemnas seemed to be doing anything to defend the world and actually did pretty good, managing to surprise and even trap their opponents. However, Rina was busy getting Suly (admittedly on Maleficent's orders) and Maleficent was essentially carpet-bombing the entire area and letting Kingdom Hearts sort 'em out. While in-character, I feel it would've hurt Dark more than helped them, not to mention how mad both Norts now are at the Mistress of Evil. All in all, Neutral had more style and skill in responding to Dark's attacks, while Dark seemed to just move in and Attack Attack Attack, with some exception to Terranort and Xemnas. I'm giving this to Neutral for their solid strategy going in and their cohesion as a team. [******Neutral******] Descriptive Writing and Sportsmanship: Both teams, in terms of descriptive writing, did very well in my opinion. Very solid writing and there was very little confusion as to what was going on. On descriptive writing alone, it's very difficult to determine the winner. So, let's go to Sportsmanship. Well, as mentioned before, Neutral had a very strong cohesion among the members of Helios's Ambition with only Suly being the odd doll out. Dark was... not, to say the least. In fact, it was split between the Norts and Maleficent and Rina. The Norts did their best to defend the world from interlopers while Rina was away trying to grab Suly, which was up in the air and Maleficent, who sent rocks down on everyone including people who supposedly were on her side. Not very sportsman-like, even for a villain. I'm going to have to give this to Neutral. [******Neutral******] Raid Winner:
******Neutral****** (God, I'm bad at this, sorry if this isn't up to snuff)
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Post by Deleted on Feb 7, 2018 4:23:48 GMT -5
Damage Inflicted and Taken: Quiet the war we had going here. The Neutral party was using more of Protection-Spells to keep damage lower. Party-wise, the build-up seemed very focused on a few damage dealers and more of supports in this fight. Team Darkness was going a full approach with damage. I would have to say that Team Dark has taken the cake from their assault. The spells that lowered the damage did make it more bearable for team Neutral though.. a tough decision I had to make.
[****** Dark ******] Skill and Style: Like I mentioned in the upper part of this Review, we had a certain amount of Support--characters on the Neutral Team and a more aggressive approach of the Dark Team. Maleficent casting Meteor and Terra and Xemnas doing the main tank and DD role did have quiet an impact on the less balanced team of Team Neutral in my eyes. Dieter as Dark Knight and the Summoner did a good job trying to hold off the attackers and the skills used on both sides were pretty amazing. Xemnas of course did have the Home-Advantage here Heh. The traps set by him showed that the writer was thinking about the situation carefully and didn’t just dash into the fight what would be unlikely for Xemnas. Plus-points for his approach. As usual Maleficent stood in the back with her magic, Rina was mostly used as something to cause irritation.
All in all... i will have to go with Team Dark on this one also.
[****** Dark ******] Descriptive Writing and Sportsmanship:The writing on both sides was pretty well done, I have to say! The canons were all in Character, the OC’s doing their best to work together to counter the approach of the enemies protecting. Suly did fall flat with her lack of words that contrasted the other’s amount of words used in their posts. Maybe she still has to get into the vibe or was lacking muse that day? Dieter chose of words showed his character-design well, the Dragon-Summoner did his best to protect, the support-character was doing a great job, that Maleficent... jesus christ, accurate. She did however completely ignore teamplay and went for Meteor of all spells to cast! Rina the servant was lovely written and the contrast of her thoughts showed well.
It’s a hard decision to make who one this one, like the other two. When it comes to writing, I will chose team Neutral for their interaction with each other at the beginning. [****** Neutral******] Raid Winner: ******Dark ******
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Post by Deleted on Feb 9, 2018 0:16:43 GMT -5
Damage Inflicted and Taken: I feel like... If given more time this would have turn out to be an interest battle instead of merely a battle of defenses, but yeah that's just my personal view point. Aside from that the battle went okay, But in terms of the actual battle... well things could have easily gotten sour for Helios Ambition with both Terra and our resident former leader of organization 13 bringing in quite the fire power on the first half. That's not even adding those blasted meteors.. Yeah if Helios didnt manage to cast those protective spells things could have gone a hell lot worse than it did. A hell lot, I mean one of them would be very much dead... Sorry Dieter but ehh... the few chances of retribution you guys got still didnt outweigh the amount of damage the other team did... [******Dark ******] Skill and Style: Well aside from being clearly and very nearly outmatched in fire power. Im glad to see the type of strategy Ysera's team incorporated in order to avoid deaths or... heavy injury. Shame it didnt stop them from getting injured but at the very least it wasnt life threatening or heavy. So that's a plus! I love how you guys used protect and shell at the start of the battle. That really helped in softening the blows you got from team darkness. ^^; As a healer myself I can safely verify protect's efficiency. Sooo my vote goes to neutrals for this. They poked the inner healer in me, what can I say? Though.... *glares at dieter* He also poked my inner screaming at eating those meteors. [****** Neutral******] Descriptive Writing and Sportsmanship: This one is going to hurt me, very much so...since you all know I'm a sucker for good writing style, which...both groups have in spades. SPADES. So thats a good thing. Especially with the little drama with Terra attacking both Syel and Cass. Dieter's reactions actually made my day there. That...is clearly one very pissed dark knight~ [******Neutral******] Raid Winner: ******Neutral******
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Post by Mirage Arena Mod on Feb 9, 2018 15:36:19 GMT -5
Thank you for your reviews!
After reading the reviews, it seems it was a rather close match. However, it seems Neutral has succeeded. Thank you so much for your assistance in this reviewing session. Your accounts have all be awarded 20 munny for your input!
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