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Post by Mirage Arena Mod on Nov 24, 2017 21:13:17 GMT -5
Raid 001 Review This raid is now in review status. Please use the template at the bottom of the page to review this raid. Full guide for reviewing can be found here. For every knowledgeable and well written review, you will gain 20 munny to the character account you post the review with. Please be sure that your review is detailed and informed. Site Rules still apply to raid reviews, so be polite and respectful. Everything a member posts is to be read as constructive criticism and is not to be taken as an attack. Any issues should be reported directly to a staff member. World Attacked: The World That Never Was Initiating Party: Xemnas [Leader - DARK] Defending Party: Scortio [Leader - LIGHT] Dark initiated the Raid. Who do you think won the Raid? Decision Date: December 1st, 2018 Template [font size="4"][b]Damage Inflicted and Taken:[/b][/font] [blockquote]Reasoning goes here, please show your work on how you made your decision.[/blockquote] [div align="center"][******[font color="yellow"]Light[/font] | [font color="red"]Dark[/font] | [font color="purple"]Neutral[/font]******][/div]
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Post by Deleted on Dec 1, 2017 13:12:17 GMT -5
Damage Inflicted and Taken: Scortio took the most damage throughout the battle, that much is obvious. However, his ability to heal with Curaga puts his damage levels closer to Xemnas', albeit his are still reasonaby larger. I'd say around a 20% more. Specially determinating was the final clash with the trade of All's End and Meteor, which was a daring strategy although it didn't work out for Scortio too well. Other determining moments in terms of Damage were Scortio's point blank gatling and Xemnas' telekinetic attack. [****** Dark ******] Skill and Style: Scortio's style was much superior, with innovative attacks adapted to how his opponent was fighting, specially impressive was the Burning Gatling attack which he managed to use very intelligently and his final Meteor attack, which although didn't work as well as he had hoped, was a bold, very in character strategy that took advantage of Xemnas' very drawn-out ultimate attack. When it comes to Xemnas I specially liked use of the environment in the telekinesis attack. However, it was Scortio who totally controlled the flow of battle by getting close and putting more and more pressure on Xemnas, who would have had a much easier battle if he had only managed to defend and zone Scortio out. [******Light ******] Descriptive Writing and Sportsmanship: Both were sporting combatants, but I'd like to warn Xemnas about excessive blocking, which is unfun in any fight. This links to the descriptive writing too, as some of these blocks don't make sense as they are described and realistically wouldn't have stopped jacksquat. Besides that, albeit Xemnas' style was clear enough, it was arid and hard to plow through, as in most instances the descriptions were too long and convoluted, trying to be as exact as possible but also throwing dynamism completely out of the window in the process, it doesn't help that Snow still has to get the hang of the character completely. On the other hand, Scortio was much more fluid. Even when his posts were longer, I read the much faster and joyously than I did Xemnas'. But the sealing deal is how cheap it felt for Xemnas to just fly away from the meteor when caught mid ultimate. It would have made sense if his attack had been interrupted in order to properly dodge, but not as it is. Either way it would have felt (and feels) pretty cheap. [******Light ******] Raid Winner: ******Light ******
Despite the damage difference, Scortio performed better as a combatant overall.
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Post by Meastro on Dec 4, 2017 9:43:37 GMT -5
Damage Inflicted and Taken: Scortio (1 action) shoot off a Fire Surge to which Xemnas (2 actions) uses Thunder Guard to block. He follows up with authority bolt. Scortio (3ish actions) takes the damage from Thunder Guard's shock. But, uses his keyblade to knock the authority bolt to the ground. He does a 4-5 hit combo with his axe ability before firing off a Triple Firaga. Xemnas(3 actions) summons weapons, blocks combo, blocks firaga, then uses telekinesis to attack. Scortio (3ish) turns his axes back to a keyblade. Does a 6-8 hit combo, fires Ars Ignus, then Fire Raid. Xemnas (3) resummons his blades and attempts to block most of the combo, minus a kick. Sinks into the floor to avoid both fire attacks and appear behind Scortio, then casts Dance of Nothingness. Scortio (3) takes the 3/5 the attack, dodges the remaining bits. Uses Gatling Gun attack. Then heals a huge amount. Scortio taking the lead here with having more HP. Xemnas (3) gets hit by some of the bullet spray while attempting to block some, activates final form, then uses All End. Scortio (1) gets hit by the attack and uses Meteor. Xemnas (1) dodges most of the attack and summons his blades again. Scortio (2) manages to dash at Xemnas, cast Fire Raid and Firaga before falling and rolling to his knee. Overall, Xemnas won. Scortio had taken far more damage, even with the Curaga. Had he been able to heal, he might have been the winner. Rather close match for fighting a powerful canon. But, I believe Xemnas took the lead here. [******Dark******] Skill and Style: Xemnas used his surroundings to his advantage with using the spires in the Alter of Naught. Scortio uses his keyblade to attempt a polevault to avoid an attack, failing because of his clothing getting caught on the spire. NO CAPES! Xemnas and Scortio both stayed VERY in-character. Xemnas keeping stiff and emotionless even though he feigned a good bit of anger at times. However, the way that Scortio is able to bounce off the ground and everything it pretty neat. I have to admit that his fighting style is really cool. Huge props to Xemnas using the Spires as it was really a great move, I think that Scortio won this section by a few inches with his fighting style and comments though I'm slightly sad no one called Xemnas a zebra. [******Light******] Descriptive Writing and Sportsmanship: Scortio had a 'combo' with his axes of 4-5 strikes, pushing the "one action" a bit in my opinion. That was a bit much in my opinion. But, Xemnas did block all attacks to count as one action. So, that cancelled each other out well. Xemnas certainly described his actions to a T. The description of how he moved to defend against the combo was easy to follow. I also loved how Xemnas explained how he would know about the casting magic, comparing it to sora's technique. Even though I think he described blocking a bit more of the Firage damage then he should have. But, he did take a bit of that hit. Scortio doing a REALLY good job of taking realistic damage by failing in his dodge of the spires, though not as descriptively as he could have. However, doing an almost 6-8 attack combo again bothers me a bit. (A slash, a kick, vertical swipe, headbutt, horizontal slash, faked kick, continuing the last slash, second horizontal slash, finishing with a diagonal slash.) Xemnas being VERY descriptive on how he blocked most of the combo, but getting hit. Scortio taking most of the sneak attack from Xemnas. Xemnas dodging most of the Meteor did bug me a little, but he did take some damage and it's not like meteor isn't avoidable. He was knocked back and hit the spires though. Overall, Xemnas dominates with his descriptive writing, explaining every little thing. His thoughts, his actions. Both showed amazing sportsmanship and balanced each other very well. But, Xemnas was very descriptive and explained everything including justifying his actions. Even stating that he went easy on the boy in the beginning in hopes of recruiting him, bringing his own personal plot into it. It got a little iffy at the end and it was really close on all fields to be honest. [******Dark******] Raid Winner: ******Dark******
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Post by Metus on Dec 6, 2017 10:58:49 GMT -5
Damage Inflicted and Taken: Considering how the attacks went back and forth, it does appear that Scortio was taking more damage, even with the heal. Heck, he even keeps mentioning the pain and such himself. xD Seems really well-written and all. Both have been doing some damage, but Xemnas did seem to avoid a lot of the damage with dodges and blocks. Meanwhile he kept dishing out abilities of his own against Scortio. Definitely Dark winning on the inflicting damage while Scortio took more damage. [******Dark******] Skill and Style: With how well the two stayed in-character and the reactions were fun to read, I feel they both were doing grand. Xemnas was making good use of his abilities and were quite well written, but Scortio's style, reactions, and honestly just how he played around the field was really fun (also his own conversation with Xemnas). Not sure what to say here. xD It was just great fun. I honestly can't make a decision, sorry... [******Draw******] Descriptive Writing and Sportsmanship: Oh boy, both were really doing well when it came to describing and sticking to reality. The battle went quite well back and forth, but how both were taking damage as they went, they really worked out their posts well. Did feel at times both of them went a bit too far with a few tidbits, but all-together I had little trouble with it. Though, on the descriptive writing, Xemnas did go rather far in describing and explaining every detail. Something I doubt I ever can go as far in. lol... They were showing good sportsmanship and honestly, I have little to input here. I liked some parts of Xemnas' personal thoughts in here too. While these two were really close, I have to go with Xemnas on this section. [******Dark******] Raid Winner: ******Dark******
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Post by Mirage Arena Mod on Dec 6, 2017 11:15:45 GMT -5
Thank you for your reviews!
After reading the reviews, it seems it was a rather close match. However, it seems Dark has succeeded. Thank you so much for your assistance in this reviewing session. Your accounts have all be awarded 20 munny for your input!
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